in my school i'll get new basket ball uni forms and school uni forms. I'll get new owned chrome books for all the kids. Pads of paper for work,pools and courts for the big kids and small kids/
I'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer learning project team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
I like how you’ve got specific ideas about improvements for the school if you were in charge. I like how you’ve thought about what to supply all the school kids with, so everyones included. I wonder what changes you’d make to the uniforms?
The pictures do well to add interest to this post and show the reader exactly what you’re talking about. This makes it more interesting to read as well.
I’m looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Hey Tawhirimatea,
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer learning project team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
I like how you’ve got specific ideas about improvements for the school if you were in charge. I like how you’ve thought about what to supply all the school kids with, so everyones included. I wonder what changes you’d make to the uniforms?
The pictures do well to add interest to this post and show the reader exactly what you’re talking about. This makes it more interesting to read as well.
I’m looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Daniel